Jade-the-X9ian's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clashing lights]

Amazing. A song with both grace and a somewhat overwhelming aura. ^_^

I really like how the song climaxes! And the many layers of the song had given it it's depth! I might just learn a thing or two from you! *adds to favourite audios*

One thing to note, though, at 01:48, the ecohs of the main melody started to get a bit blury and overlaped with the background notes, I don't know if that is what you indended to do, though, but if you had intended to do so, then you've done a great job, but if that's not the case, you might want to mess around with those VSD Models for a bit. The Notes are just overlapping each other too much.

Nicely done! I hope to hear more of these awsome audios from you!

Orpheon responds:

I...Thanks!
I'm really happy that someone likes this.

As it happens, I didn't intend that. Around 1:46 is a really strange effect, namely that the LFO which is set to exactly an 8th is somehow offbeat, is that what you mean? If it isn't, I'm not sure what you heard.

Also, what is a VSD model?

[A new Day]

Agreed with FangzLife. Also, you may want to try and work on your chords. most of them are okay, but a few of them sounds a bit off.

Other wise, good job! ^_^

Orpheon responds:

Thank you very much for the feedback! (same to Fangzlife, I don't know how I can answer to two people)

Which chords are "wrong" here? Do you mean 0:25-0:17?
Or did you mean something else?

As for repetition, alright. I'm going to see whether I can make it less so, although probably not with this song.